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Fri, Jul 29, 2011 at 9:53 PM By: Mick-Mars51

A bloody furnace
Counting tears like falling rain
Tender kisses halt


(one of my first haikus written one long dreary day ago in the middle of English class a billion years ago. And thanks to you guys for the warm welcomes^^)

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    On Sat, Jul 30, 2011 at 7:41 PM, Mick-Mars51 said:

    yeah. this was inspired by a close friend that committed suicide about 3 years ago. It was my tribute to him.

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    On Sat, Jul 30, 2011 at 12:15 PM, Bene Gesserit said:

    hm I imagine a loved one who died. Cremating..while the survivor goes through the sorrow and pain of it all.

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    On Fri, Jul 29, 2011 at 11:16 PM, Kick the P.A said:

    Very nice. Along with KnifeMaster I’ve never been a big fan of haikus, or poems for that matter (since my English teacher ruined that type of writing for me), but this is lovely and I look forward to reading more of your work! :D

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    On Fri, Jul 29, 2011 at 10:01 PM, KnifeMaster said:

    That is fantastic. Usually I fin haikus to be silly. But this paints a really vivid picture.

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