Ok, i need my fellow KoRn lover's help. Please?

Fri, Jul 13, 2012 at 9:18 PM By: let1rock1liv1forever

Ok, i am gonna put one of my poems into a contest. I'm stuck between three that i think are my best. If you guys could help me pick i would love you forever.

Ok, option one.

Nothing At All

Why did you take it all away from me?
My best friend,
My brother,
Even my enemies

Why did you kill them all?
Leaving them to suffer and bleed
With your guns and your bombs
Death to you all

Why did you come!?
You worthless,
Why did you come!?
And take it all away from me!

I have nothing left
Everything's gone
Everything's now yours

But you wont kill me
That would be to good of a deed
For a worthless fellow like you,
To give to anyone,
Especially me

You've turned me bitter
You took away my life
My childhood,
You ended it with a knife

Nothing is left
You took it all
I have no one
Nothing at all

Option two.

No Need To Be Sad

I was sad, sad, way to sad
Till the day i jumped in the air
Right over there
I hung up there
And thought, thought, thought
I wasn't going no where

No need to be sad
You should run around glad
With your old lad,
Up, up in the air

No need to be down
Just act like a clown
Just act like you dont care.

So standing there with that rope around me
I begged and begged, begged
But they didnt let me free

So i closed my eyes
And thought of my friends
And thought of my foes, my foes too

Thought of my love~
And all the mistakes that ive done

And i just knew

That i shouldnt be sad
I should be just glad
I should run around, and laugh too

I figured the truth
I should just hang lose~
Because i know i will lose
In the end

So that's me up, up in the air
Just hanging there
Because a foe cared

But there so need to cry
Don't say your last goodbye
Ill always be there
For you

Opition three.

On Your Way

Grab onto a tree with your locked knees
Go see what this world has come to be
Upside down,
And dumbfounded you will be

Come down and on the way scratch your knees
See the pain living here can bring
See the blood that's shed day too day
Then go be on your way

On your way
Aren't you so hungry?
Too bad this world eats to eternal sleep
While others starve themselves bone deep
And we do nothing

While you leave don't you want to help?
Those poor kids hiding with a yelp
Don't you want to go soothe their beating hearts?
Too bad that man needs them to pay for cards

Outside you see a girl tying a noose
Too bad she has learned the worlds ugly truth
I'm sorry you had to leave this way
Go on your way.

If you guys helped me i would love you forever! Pwetty pwease!?

  1. Wind Dancer avatar

    On Sat, Jul 14, 2012 at 6:53 AM, Wind Dancer said:

    #3! :)

  2. let1rock1liv1forever avatar

    On Sat, Jul 14, 2012 at 1:24 AM, let1rock1liv1forever said:

    Thank you guys!

  3. RUBENRCKS avatar

    On Sat, Jul 14, 2012 at 12:59 AM, RUBENRCKS said:


  4. Tammie avatar

    On Fri, Jul 13, 2012 at 10:02 PM, Tammie said:

    I like number 3

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