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Now I Run
Slapping me
Beating me
Down
So i cant make a sound
You're screaming so loud
God, help me out
Stabbing your heart
Watching you choke
On your blood as i poke
You with this little knife.
Blood on my hands
A smile on my face
The death you caused me
Has brought you your fate
Run
Run
As fast as i can
Run away from you
Or whatever's left
Soon they will see
What you did to me
And why i did what i did
And they will forgive me.
But for now i run
With a blood soaked shirt
It went from white to red
As you screamed on your bed
And now.
Good-night my dear friend.
Comments
On Mon, Aug 20, 2012 at 7:38 PM, sickness08 said:
I like this poem. Reminds me of the Movie Primal Fear with Edward Norton and Richard Gere.
On Tue, Aug 14, 2012 at 1:01 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:
Thank you guys, and it's suppose to be creepy. That's kinnda the point lol.
On Mon, Aug 13, 2012 at 6:38 PM, Katie Pohl said:
this has excellent flow Its rad as hell
On Sun, Aug 12, 2012 at 9:32 PM, RUBENRCKS said:
zack liked it !!!! hahaha i missed your blogs so much, u bloody double cero sister, u br so awesome but nope u wont b forgiven ever hahaha it was all planed and u went for it blood on your ..... blouse so bloody u cant even tell what farbe was it before the blutshed!!!
On Sun, Aug 12, 2012 at 7:33 PM, ZackaryVS said:
Um... creepy...
On Sun, Aug 12, 2012 at 7:00 PM, RUBENRCKS said:
u run... i drink my booze everynight....
On Sun, Aug 12, 2012 at 6:38 PM, RUBENRCKS said:
haha bloody u !!!! seems u r in danger of becoming a serial killer.... hahaha or r u making one? somewhere out there, reading u following u worshipping u...hey teacher leave them kids alone, hahaha u r good send schivers down my.....