Now I Run

Sun, Aug 12, 2012 at 3:33 PM By: let1rock1liv1forever

Slapping me
Beating me
So i cant make a sound
You're screaming so loud
God, help me out

Stabbing your heart
Watching you choke
On your blood as i poke
You with this little knife.

Blood on my hands
A smile on my face
The death you caused me
Has brought you your fate

As fast as i can
Run away from you
Or whatever's left
Soon they will see
What you did to me
And why i did what i did
And they will forgive me.

But for now i run
With a blood soaked shirt
It went from white to red
As you screamed on your bed
And now.
Good-night my dear friend.

  1. sickness08 avatar

    On Mon, Aug 20, 2012 at 7:38 PM, sickness08 said:

    I like this poem. Reminds me of the Movie Primal Fear with Edward Norton and Richard Gere.

  2. let1rock1liv1forever avatar

    On Tue, Aug 14, 2012 at 1:01 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:

    Thank you guys, and it's suppose to be creepy. That's kinnda the point lol.

  3. Katie Levy avatar

    On Mon, Aug 13, 2012 at 6:38 PM, Katie Levy said:

    this has excellent flow Its rad as hell

  4. RUBENRCKS avatar

    On Sun, Aug 12, 2012 at 9:32 PM, RUBENRCKS said:

    zack liked it !!!! hahaha i missed your blogs so much, u bloody double cero sister, u br so awesome but nope u wont b forgiven ever hahaha it was all planed and u went for it blood on your ..... blouse so bloody u cant even tell what farbe was it before the blutshed!!!

  5. ZackaryVS avatar

    On Sun, Aug 12, 2012 at 7:33 PM, ZackaryVS said:

    Um... creepy...

  6. RUBENRCKS avatar

    On Sun, Aug 12, 2012 at 7:00 PM, RUBENRCKS said:

    u run... i drink my booze everynight....

  7. RUBENRCKS avatar

    On Sun, Aug 12, 2012 at 6:38 PM, RUBENRCKS said:

    haha bloody u !!!! seems u r in danger of becoming a serial killer.... hahaha or r u making one? somewhere out there, reading u following u worshipping u...hey teacher leave them kids alone, hahaha u r good send schivers down my.....

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