1. jayjay avatar

    On Fri, Apr 26, 2013 at 9:39 AM, jayjay said:

    Just pick up your guitar,(if you can play one, & if you got one) And away you go. Did you realy write that??? DEEP.=(

  2. frenchi avatar

    On Fri, Apr 26, 2013 at 7:47 AM, frenchi said:

    That is some deep stuff, and like mlukec said, the first and last lines really stand out.

    Nice work!

  3. mlukec avatar

    On Thu, Apr 25, 2013 at 5:01 PM, mlukec said:

    The emotion conveyed and the repeated lines in the first and last stanzas give the poem strength. Very deep. I would almost take something away from the middle to streamline it. It is a good poem; I apologize if I was more critical than you wanted.

  4. mlukec avatar

    On Thu, Apr 25, 2013 at 4:55 PM, mlukec said:

    It is nice. It made me think of Christian Grey, if Ana left him.

  5. Faust avatar

    On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 9:42 PM, Faust said:

    Wow. That is deep. Did you lose someone reccently?

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