Sun, Jun 30, 2013 at 6:18 PM By: pandemonium23

I was cleaning my room and I found my very first poem that I ever was published in a book called "Award Winning Young Writers Of America" and I wrote it in 5th grade when I was ten, which was a while back...I wanted to share it all with you...this poem means so much to me because this was the beginning of everything I have ever written, it was the beginning of my inspiration...Here it is! :)

Earth's Garden

Everyone in the world begins
as a tiny seed,
Delicate and small,
No one knows what is going
to be expected of them,
But one bright and sunny day
You begin to grow,
Beginning with a bud,
Day by day you get a little stronger,
Then you start growing beautiful petals,
Your very own unique petals,
No one can have the same petals as you do,
Because everyone is different
In their own special way,
But one day you begin to wilt,
Which tells you it is time to leave,
And when you are gone a new seed is born,
Blooming just as you did...

  1. SAFLove avatar

    On Tue, Aug 27, 2013 at 7:52 PM, SAFLove said:

    thi is so beatuful and so meaning full it reveals the life we live, and i love your use of the flowers and petals..

  2. korn warlord avatar

    On Mon, Jul 1, 2013 at 1:18 PM, korn warlord said:

    very nice

  3. jayjay avatar

    On Mon, Jul 1, 2013 at 10:51 AM, jayjay said:

    These are the ones I like, small but sweet! Nice one.=)

  4. Trip avatar

    On Sun, Jun 30, 2013 at 9:17 PM, Trip said:

    Awesome so glad you keep your poems its funny how you can forget writing them to

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