Inspiration

Sat, Jul 6, 2013 at 3:02 PM By: pandemonium23

Okay, this is how I feel and see the world when I am inspired, I am not exaggerating....I am being serious...Has anyone ever felt this way before? When I am inspired everything just comes together, and I have this urge to write a poem...so, here it is, I hope you enjoy.:D

Inspiration

All around me is perfection,
The light shines through into
A world grey and muffled,
My heart is pounding,
And my eyes close
As the voices sing to me
So beautifully

My body starts to shake
As it flows through me...
I am awoken from a slumber
That felt like an eternity

My eyes see the ordinary,
And it blossoms in front of me,
My soul is free...
I am in a fantasy
No one else can see...

My veins are filled with a
Substance so enthralling...
It is called inspiration,
And it's calling so softly,
Accompanying the space
All around me...

  1. SAFLove avatar

    On Thu, Aug 29, 2013 at 2:08 AM, SAFLove said:

    so i sang your poem and i didnt read before hand it flowed so nice, i had to look up the word enthrall..whichmeans to fascinate and i love this poem its like i noe (know) wha tyou mean when you are inspired, it like a coming toghet in your soul when something enchants it or inspires it..cause its what is meant to be for our souls

  2. SAFLove avatar

    On Thu, Aug 29, 2013 at 2:08 AM, SAFLove said:

    so i sang your poem and i didnt read before hand it flowed so nice, i had to look up the word enthrall..whichmeans to fascinate and i love this poem its like i noe (know) wha tyou mean when you are inspired, it like a coming toghet in your soul when something enchants it or inspires it..cause its what is meant to be for our souls

  3. steuf avatar

    On Tue, Jul 9, 2013 at 12:06 AM, steuf said:

    pandemonium is a castel, a form of mental structure.
    what are you built, a trap.
    funny for fish.

  4. Silent Metal avatar

    On Sun, Jul 7, 2013 at 4:24 AM, Silent Metal said:

    I cannot say i have experienced anything quite like that, it sounds amazing Pandemonium, much like your poems continue to be.

  5. Twisted Transistor avatar

    On Sun, Jul 7, 2013 at 2:07 AM, Twisted Transistor said:

    Beautiful So inspirational, I want to dance with it!

  6. jayjay avatar

    On Sat, Jul 6, 2013 at 4:02 PM, jayjay said:

    Wow Pandemonium23S, That was the best one I have read in quite a while now, An inspiration you surely are. Love it.=)JJ.

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